no stop i love this piece i think it has a kind of serenity to it. your reference was busier and had a clearer picture. watercolour isnt supposed to look perfect. this piece is absolutely fantastic and i love everything about it. i love watercolour and i work with it as well. i have some of my work i am going to upload soon if you want to check them out later.
you are really talented, dont strive for photographic perfection. strive for a style that is all your own.